Targets For Essay

1. The Essay Is On The British Film Industry, Use British Examples. I already used British examples, but reference back to them more often wouldn't hurt.
2. Examples Must Be Used For Working Title, Warp And Hollywood Should Be Used As Examples. I, again, did this, but using examples more often would be just dandy!
3. Always Refer Back to The Question. I will look back at the question more often, however, i think that i did it already, i just need to do it more clearly.
4. I Must Discuss Audiences And Institutions. I must look into the institutions in more detail and also look at audience's opinion.
5. Use The Term Audience Not People. I will apply this into my essay.
6. Use Correct Terminology. I feel as though i used terminology, although i know very little, knowing more and applying it to my essay would score more points.
7. Use Detailed Points And Explain Not Describe e.g. Use PEE. I will follow a structure of PEE so that i cover more points and hopefully score a higher mark.